The Arches
This one from the archives is for the Writers Island prompt “The Journey”.
The Arches
That day we floated
down the brownish river
in a makeshift ship,
a construction site derelict
stolen in the half light of dusk,
we were maybe twelve
in wet blue jeans
and tee shirts rolled
at the sleeves according to custom
in those placid fifties.
The tainted shallow water
was no hindrance
that warm August day; to us
it was just cool
in the heat.
The tall dark bridge seen
through the downstream haze
looked imposing from where we
sat. Its high shadowed arches
rising ominously to the clouds.
Our progress slowed in the shallows
by dragging the old mortar box
over the mud and rocks,
stopping occasionally
to chase the Crayfish
from their hiding places
that summer on the river
called “Bronx”
looking ahead to that bridge
fearing to go under it
lest some strange thing
come from the shadows
of its tall arches
looming ahead, so close now
portending doom.
Yet we push on slowly,
determined to make memories
of our young fear not realizing
we would never make it
that far.
© RonRusso 2007


So many of these words brought vivid images and memories to me - the wet jeans, rolled sleeves, placid fifties and mortar box boat. And yes, it’s a surprise to find that so far in the past…Nice work!
I could see these guys, the whole environment they were in. Nicely done and chilling end!