Comments on: My Imaginary Life 2

By: ronrusso

ronrusso — Wed, 12 Sep 2007 17:44:22 +0000

Thank you all so much. And to think I really wasn't sure I liked this one all that well!

By: Clare

Clare — Wed, 12 Sep 2007 06:52:29 +0000

Hi Ron! Really nice poem! And I love the interconnectedness in it — like with "this imaginary life…tweaking your own imaginary life." And "the universe remembers" makes my spirit soar.

By: paisley

paisley — Wed, 12 Sep 2007 05:05:41 +0000

i write… so that i will be remebered…. this was lovely….

By: Lea

Lea — Wed, 12 Sep 2007 04:41:57 +0000

Beautiful poem. I especially like that last line… "and the universe remembers." Thank you!

By: gautami

gautami — Wed, 12 Sep 2007 01:49:24 +0000

Ron, there is so much in this poem. Indeed, we get inspired by other writers. We imagine their words and create our own pieces. The cycle goes on. "Thus you write your own
tome of a life imagined
in line and verse."This resonates.