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20  08 2007

Daybreak

for week 64, One Deep Breath prompt: “daybreak”

 

one deep breath

 

 

Light breaks over hills

When darkness overwhelms

The Earth just smiles

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Enlightenment comes

Out of an empty cosmos

Day lilies laugh

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Lightness of heart

shatters the night doom

at dawns horizon


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9 Responses to “Daybreak”

  1. Becca, Said:
    on August 21st, 2007 at 7:24 am


    Stunning photo and haiku!~loved this line…"when darkness overwhelms, the earth just smiles"  

  2. Clare, Said:
    on August 21st, 2007 at 8:16 am


    Breathtaking photo.  Your haiku are really nice and create vivid pictures of beautiful daybreaks — and I like the image of the earth smiling and day lilies laughing!:)

  3. Crafty Green Poet, Said:
    on August 21st, 2007 at 9:47 am


    stunning photo - looks like a wonderful place!

  4. Marcia (MeeAugraphie), Said:
    on August 21st, 2007 at 7:27 pm


    I am in awe  - the photo.Your haiku were a joy to read.

  5. tumblewords, Said:
    on August 21st, 2007 at 11:38 pm


    Wonderful photo, wonderful words! Love it!

  6. patois, Said:
    on August 23rd, 2007 at 12:32 pm


    That photo is breathtaking. The haiku are wonderful. I especially enjoyed the thought of the shattering of the night doom.

  7. Quietpaths, Said:
    on August 24th, 2007 at 2:35 pm


    I am late visiting your post this week, but wow:  What a beautiful presentation.  I too admire that first very much.

  8. Patricia (a/k/a Roswila), Said:
    on August 27th, 2007 at 11:55 am


    Love that line "day lilies laugh."  :-D

  9. a laughing gypsy, Said:
    on August 27th, 2007 at 8:24 pm


    That photo takes my breath away!

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