30
05
2007
Common Ground
He thought, I love you.
She said aloud, as if she heard
the words; I love you too.
He then knew
Yes. We are one.
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Deep intimacy there! Sounds like they’rve definitely found their common ground!
My romantic friend, you have expressed my favorite common ground!
Thank you both. I did a slight revision to this one but I can’t get it to save. Something is wrong with my editor. I’ll try to get it fixed soon.
BTW, this was based on a longer poem that depicted an actual event where she appeared to “hear” my unspoken thought. She can still do that to me today! Uncanny.
(Ok. Everything seems to be working now)
My most fave them too. Lovely…