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21  10 2007

Closeness

This weeks One Deep Breath haiku prompt is ‘closeness’. My response:

There is that place

where no boundaries exist

Lion and Lamb are one

You are the center

of the Earth and as hot

how can you escape?


Love made

wet skin on skin

felt closeness

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7 Responses to “Closeness”

  1. Judy, Said:
    on October 22nd, 2007 at 8:46 am


    each one expresses well ‘closeness.’

  2. plain foolish, Said:
    on October 22nd, 2007 at 9:40 am


    I love them, especially the first.

  3. Quietpaths, Said:
    on October 22nd, 2007 at 3:55 pm


    I am drawn to all of these in different ways.  The first because of peace, the second speaks eternity and hope, the third is very sensual.  Great job. Really.

  4. Sandy, Said:
    on October 22nd, 2007 at 3:57 pm


    great expressions!

  5. barone, Said:
    on October 22nd, 2007 at 7:07 pm


    All three bring pause; I love the middle one and the reminder that we are already on fire.Thanks, Jodi

  6. Patricia (a/k/a Roswila), Said:
    on October 22nd, 2007 at 9:13 pm


    Really like that first one.  Yes, One-ness at the core of it all.

  7. qualcosa di bello, Said:
    on October 23rd, 2007 at 2:18 pm


    marvelous variety…beautifully expressing the prompt.  i am very fond of the first

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