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20  03 2007

Breath

My contribution to “One Deep Breath” Haiku blog:


sunset


there is just one breath

cosmologically speaking

do you know of it?


the earth knows of it

the green and yellow of it

blazed across the sky


Sun pulses its breath

gives its life to all who care

do we not love it?


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10 Responses to “Breath”

  1. Jone, Said:
    on March 20th, 2007 at 9:56 pm


    Beautifully said. what a gorgeous photo.

  2. ronrusso, Said:
    on March 20th, 2007 at 10:07 pm


    Thanks, Jone. I’m surprised I got a comment so soon. I just barely got it posted.

  3. Crafty Green Poet, Said:
    on March 21st, 2007 at 6:53 am


    Lovely, especially the second haiku.

  4. Regina Clare Jane, Said:
    on March 21st, 2007 at 7:46 am


    One breath, indeed- all other breaths flow from that…
    Just lovely…

  5. Tammy, Said:
    on March 21st, 2007 at 11:46 am


    You have a fun blog, loved the visit! You haiku were wonderful…true breath!

  6. Star, Said:
    on March 21st, 2007 at 4:54 pm


    All creation made from one deep breath–beautiful series of haiku with a stunning photo.

  7. Megan, Said:
    on March 21st, 2007 at 11:09 pm


    perfect truth beautifully told.

  8. Brian, Said:
    on March 22nd, 2007 at 11:26 am


    Beautifully done.

  9. ronrusso, Said:
    on March 22nd, 2007 at 2:15 pm


    Thanks to everyone, again. I really do appreciate your taking the time to come by and chat awhile. As some in the South are fond of saying….”Ya’ll come back now, hear?”
    (While born here I actually grew up in New York)

  10. Beaman, Said:
    on March 23rd, 2007 at 6:49 pm


    I like the first one especially. It is perfect.

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